The words dripped from her mouth like pearls-elegant and striking. She raised and lowered her cigarette airily like a significant wave or gesture to an imposer, beckoning them forward. (fun starts here) Her lips lulled in lazy licks pouring out pampered precociously paragraphs. Her sentences stirred seductively then suddenly shifted, souring into a sneer as she spat sparks of gossip from so innocent a face. (end of fun) And that sweet smell of vanilla that once hovered around her movements turned putrid as she threatened at the necks of all those enticed by her facade.
(author notes..hahaha)
i probably should take out all those fun things, but i really think they are cool.
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She whistled out an almost circuitous string of words. It hung in the air like smoke from firworks-the aftermateh of a lost breathing thing melting slowly into the universe as she coaxed her story to life once more.
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